A quick mock-up

[Aephion]

I'd like to know what you people think; and wether I should continue it or not. It's only 31 seconds long, but it's my first time using Finale and about my third time using midi software, so ... this took long enough >.>;

Anyway, here goes:

Can't Take No More

[MaestroX]

I think you should continue on this one, it got the potencial to be reall good. You use some good rhythms and some ok harmony.
Here are some things that I picked up of:
-At 0:33 in the left hand you have a 10th which would be impossible to play for the majority of piano players.
-Just after you have a clash between a G, and an A. I don't quite see the function of the clash.

Jst really small things to be honest, but I think you could make it into somthing realy cool.

Hope this helps

[reith]

It's interesting rhytmically. I didn't personally like the start but that's just my opinion. I reckon it could be made into something - like where you left off could recap the opening or move into some kind of development.

[tawei82]

I like it very much. The rhythm is very catchy and Its hard to count the beat correcty. is it 3/8? I just listen to midi only

[Aephion]

Thanks for your reactions! I'm so sorry I didn't reply sooner!
Lots has been happening, and I'm rooting for my application at the nearest (good) conservatory so uh, things've been busy! ^_^

MaestroX:
Little other to say than thanks

reith:
Yeah, that would be the idea, but if only i knew how to continue XD

tawei82:
well great ^_^
't Has been a while, but I believe it's noted as 6/8