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Old 12-11-2006, 08:23 PM
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Darius The Great

Hi everybody, i am new into the world of orchetral composition.
I am usually making Pop/electronic music
so this is one of my first short composition about Darius the Great the king of persia.
I might have made some mistakes
http://perso.orange.fr/soheil/zic/ot...us_legrand.mp3
Thanks on advance for listening and your advice
Soheil
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Old 12-11-2006, 08:29 PM
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Hi there, welcome to Music-Web

You make some great use of percussion and string techniques such as tremloande. A bit of an abrupt ending for my taste. I think also there needs to be a climax to this piece. At the moment it seems to be building towards somthing, but dosn't get there. Good job though for your first orchestral piece.

What samples/VSTs did you use to create this piece?
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Old 13-11-2006, 01:47 PM
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Hi MaestroX,
You are totally right i didn't know how to finsh this music so i tried this nonsense ending.

Thanks for your comments i am going back to work on it i think i need to sit down and think about the subjet first.

Thanks again

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Old 13-11-2006, 09:01 PM
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No problem, I would be very interested to se how you develop this. Hope to see the final product
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