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Old 13-11-2006, 11:24 PM
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My second Try

Hi this is a second piece that i have done for a frend's animation, i don't like to talk about composiition cause the beguning is more than inspired by "Van heilsing" of Silvestri.
Anyway i am just learning.

http://perso.orange.fr/soheil/zic/other/poursuite.mp3

Thanks on advance for listening and your advice
Soheil
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Old 13-11-2006, 11:31 PM
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Dramatic stuff! Definitely soundtrack ideas. Compact, nice sound… Let’s see the animation!

Well done!

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Old 13-11-2006, 11:42 PM
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I reconise the style your aiming for. The VanHellsing track "burn it down" is similar. I think to replicate the ideas you need to use lots of purcussion. Also try to use some brass effects such as the rip which give a very filmy effect to a piece.
Good going so far!
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Old 13-11-2006, 11:44 PM
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Certainly is dramatic and engaging. Well done - scoring is superb. Was it meant to end as it did - I mean, it was surging along then "gave way" to a slow diminished arpeggio on lower strings and...just ended (it almost begs the start of a second subject, were it a symphony!) But the ending might have fitted the animation.

A superb piece, all the same.
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Old 16-11-2006, 12:15 PM
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Thank you guys for your comments, i still don't have the permission to put the animation online but maybe soon

Thanks again

Soheil
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