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25-02-2007, 02:41 PM
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| Nwärdoth I wrote this piece for someone on another website, and I quite liked it then. As I keep listening to it, the rough chords create a fine amount of dissonance, which sort of works for this tune, but my counterpoint was really weak. Still, I find it really good. What, I can't attatch files? Okay, here: http://amytheofmusic.clanagony.clans...Nw%e4rdoth.mp3  |
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#2
26-02-2007, 03:46 AM
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| Re: Nwärdoth Very nice piece. I didn't catch where the "dissonances" were though. The only immediate suggesstion I have is to omit the final cymbal(whatever it is) clash on the last note. It just doesn't fit. |
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#3
26-02-2007, 03:51 AM
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| Re: Nwärdoth The dissonance that I spoke of came in the "chorus", to speak. Between the brass and woodwind section, the winds were playing an A# minor chord, while the Brass started on a quarter note run, starting on F#. It's not huge dissonance, but it was enoug to catch someone's attention, so I decided to mention it. |
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#4
03-03-2007, 05:34 PM
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| Re: Nwärdoth I liked a lot of what I heard in the opening. Your use of rests/silence to for your rhythm was very nice. I think the piece might benefit from a little more harmonic and melodic variety. I think you have some nice ideas going on that you could be developed even further. |
