Strategy Game

[Aephion]

something I've started working on this morning, it took me about 30 mins to get this far.

I know I have to 'repeat' more than I'm currently doing, so um, if you could then please tell me what sections need to be repeated or variated on

Again, for school, and I realise I'm being a little anti-social by not responding to any other compositions but my own. This is because I'm under a bit of stress and an enormous workload at the moment, so please bear with me and I'll do my utmost best to reply to some of your works as soon as life lets me ^_^;

Hope y'all not upset or anything >.>;;

(also, my works will be midi-only for a while, because my main PC has died on me, so I'm working on a virtually-incapable-of-anything laptop)

[reith]

Originally Posted by Aephion

something I've started working on this morning, it took me about 30 mins to get this far.

I know I have to 'repeat' more than I'm currently doing, so um, if you could then please tell me what sections need to be repeated or variated on

That's difficult because it depends how you want to develop it and what you really want. You've got a fair bit into this 1.06. (I'm not too hot on games these days, so I don't know the genre. Apart from Moto GP and Halflife II I haven't had my hands on a machine for a while!)

Hope y'all not upset or anything >.>;;

Nope! But I'm dying for one of those good-old english breakfasts... maybe I'll have one for tea.

(also, my works will be midi-only for a while, because my main PC has died on me, so I'm working on a virtually-incapable-of-anything laptop)

Sorry to hear about that.

let's hear some more, then.


reith.

[MaestroX]

I think you've got a good start on this and you've got the basic structure you just need to beef up some of the harmony and the orchestration.

I think the progression at the start of the piece is good, but could do with a rescore to make the progression more secure.

Overall I like it, I sense FF8 influences here and there and i'd like to see what the finished product is like.