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#1
23-12-2006, 04:43 AM
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| World Of Desolation Comments please =)  |
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#2
23-12-2006, 09:56 AM
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| Hi Jake! Quite interesting. I think that there is a bit of over use of percussion especially in the central section. Tubular bells are better used ti pick out cadence points etc rather than be used as a melody line. It definitely portrays the title well! |
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#3
23-12-2006, 03:24 PM
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| Thanks. And i am quite aware of my chimes (tubular bells) repeating a lot, but i thought it added to the song quite nicely. Anyhow, I might think aobut changing it- but then again i may not.  Thanks for your thoughts =) Last edited by Jake Hodges : 23-12-2006 at 03:29 PM. |
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#4
23-12-2006, 04:43 PM
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| I'm not sure what to make of this - is it meant as incidental music, game music or a concert piece? I did try but it wasn't desolate enough to be desolate nor powerful enough to be martial. A little more reverb might make it darker, and quietening the V-motif after it's initial entry in favour of other voices getting through may help. However, you're the composer - it's your call. Cheers, Reith |
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#5
23-12-2006, 04:59 PM
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| Well aren't you just Mr. Negative? Lol, jk. I see what you mean  |
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#6
23-12-2006, 05:42 PM
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| Yeah? I don't think of myself as negative or positive. Your original post said "Comments please". It would have been nice to know what the music is for as I could focus my comment better. However, if what I said is unacceptable, just say and I'll delete it. cheers, Reith. |
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#7
23-12-2006, 09:31 PM
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| Nah, i was just messin' around. I appreciate any comments of any kind. |
