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Old 19-05-2007, 12:00 PM
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Sunny Afternoon

My first attempt to write a "jazzy" piece.

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Old 19-05-2007, 09:49 PM
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Re: Sunny Afternoon

Nice piece, though it could've used some more swing, or what they call "feel" (yuck, I hate that term). I also found the ending a bit too abrupt.

Looking forward to your next Jazz piece.
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Old 22-05-2007, 02:54 PM
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Re: Sunny Afternoon

Most pleasant. Has an easy swing to it. Here and there I felt a couple of the left hand notes/harmony might be adjusted and perhaps using a higher octave for variety, like in the reprise.

Very nice, though.
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