New Scherzo version of my first piano sonata

[andreasvanharen]

Hi!
I did a lot of rewriting on the 3th movement of my first piano sonata, the Scherzo. I wrote a calmer middle section and added a coda next to some other beauty editing.

I added the score with this post, and here is the link to the mp3 file:

Scherzo

love to hear comments again!

greetings,
André, Sweden

[PeterG]

Hi Andre,

Is it me or does the pdf only show part of the music?

I liked the theme and the energy very much. At some points the music seemed to "trip" over itself somehow (I can't tell you where exactly in what measures).

In the part that was shown on the pdf I would change the chord in measure 134 and 138. They seemed uhm..... well a bit out of place. I doubted very much if that was intentional as it hardly ever happens anywhere else. Same with 173 and 177.

Thanks for showeing a very enjoyable piece of music again,

Peter

[andreasvanharen]

Originally Posted by PeterG

Hi Andre,

Is it me or does the pdf only show part of the music?

I liked the theme and the energy very much. At some points the music seemed to "trip" over itself somehow (I can't tell you where exactly in what measures).

In the part that was shown on the pdf I would change the chord in measure 134 and 138. They seemed uhm..... well a bit out of place. I doubted very much if that was intentional as it hardly ever happens anywhere else. Same with 173 and 177.

Thanks for showeing a very enjoyable piece of music again,

Peter

Hi Peter,
I checked it at my piano but they are correct. They sound good in my ears and give the right dramatic sound that I intend there. Thanks for pointing it out, though.

André

[PeterG]

Originally Posted by andreasvanharen

Hi Peter,
I checked it at my piano but they are correct. They sound good in my ears and give the right dramatic sound that I intend there. Thanks for pointing it out, though.

André

André, you are the composer.....

greetings and keep writing,

Peter


music..... you don't always have to love it.