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[PeterG]

Originally Posted by andreasvanharen

Hi Peter,
I thought about your replay a long time and looked if there could be some more music in the second part, and yes, I think there is a very good spot for it. But then... it would make this movement to complex and again longer then I wanted it to be. My idea here was to have a simple in between part between two more intense movements. Thanks for the input, though.

André

Hi Andre,

I'm not saying it should be longer, au contraire! I like the setup as it is, but (and I did think long and hard about what's troubling me with it too...) I guess I miss the end resolve to F. I'd put for example the little theme (with some soft notes to go with it) of measure 2 behind it (or likewise) simply to close it up entirely. Right now , to me, it feels like there is something more coming, but there isn't...

you're welcome,

Peter

P.S. I won't bother you with this one anymore now... promised.