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Old 31-03-2007, 11:18 PM
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Short piece for piano and strings

Check it out and let me know what you think...its only about 30 seconds so its easy to listen to

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Old 01-04-2007, 09:26 AM
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Re: Short piece for piano and strings

What a beautiful piece! You just have to extend it.
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Old 01-04-2007, 10:59 PM
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Re: Short piece for piano and strings

That was really really pretty. You do need to extend it. I'd love to hear more. =)
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Old 02-04-2007, 11:27 AM
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Re: Short piece for piano and strings

Nice piece, do you have any plans to expand it? I'd love to hear this developed
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Old 02-04-2007, 03:41 PM
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Re: Short piece for piano and strings

Agree with the others - nice production too.
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Re: Short piece for piano and strings

I thought it was a little boring maybe add a little more depth to the piano part. But I did like what you did with the strings in this piece. Unless you do something to improve it I'd say cut it down to 5 secs because it really doesn't grab you. zzzzz I suggest listening to some of Ennio Morricones work for some inspiration. His musics contemporary and relaxing but keeps you interested. I'm not trying to be mean it is a nice piece but it definitely has more potential.
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Old 04-04-2007, 09:42 AM
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Re: Short piece for piano and strings

Hi Laura.

I do not think that it was meant to grab you. It is more like Saties music.
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Re: Short piece for piano and strings

I guess I didn't really think about it till you pointed that out. Now that I listen to it it does somewhat resemble some of Saties pieces. But I still think he could do something to make it a little more interesting.
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Re: Short piece for piano and strings

Yeees, really, great stuff... develop it to end, I'm looking forward to hear more! Wonderfull sound!
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Old 07-04-2007, 10:46 AM
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Re: Short piece for piano and strings

Do you get the message now?

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